So I was organizing my classroom for next year and came across some stories that were written by my third graders. I asked several questions and their job was to write a story to go along with one of the questions. Here are just a few of their stories as written by them:
What Might Happen If A Player In The Orchestra Continuously Played All The Wrong Notes?
Every body would leave and start screaming and yelling and taring [tearing] the chairs apart. and some people would cry because they paid alot of money to see it. I would start crying because couldn't find my family.
- Kara
What Might Happen If An Orchestra Had No Conductor?
Everyone would get off tune and keep going and never know when to stop People would blow up because they would never stop. I would have to call the ambulains [ambulence] to make them stop.
- Sara
What I think what might happen if a symphony Orchestra didn't have a conductor everyone would forget to go to the bathroom before so they would half [have] to go during the musical.
- Alexis
Everything would go wrong and someone mite [might] play the wrong instrument and some one mite not blow spit out of there [their] trumpet and spit flew all over the audience.
- Susie
3 years ago
2 comments:
What's funny to me is that when you were correcting the children's spelling, you misspelled the word ambulance.
Secondly, shouldn't all of these comments been made by boys and not girls? People exploding? Spitting on the audience?
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